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This is my first ever article, so I would appreciate any feedback or criticism.
As constructive criticism, I will say that it is better not to use bold type for paragraphs. It is better to use it only in the headings to improve the contrast of thickness.
And I would use Wikiless instead of Wikipedia to cite sources. It's lighter than Wikipedia and doesn't use JavaScript (I saw that you're against JavaScript so you might be interested). It has a dark mode as well. I like the little details like putting the bibliography at the bottom or putting the date of the day. I liked the article and I agree with what you say.
Thanks, i'll look into wikiless.