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My first post on Lemmy, it's one of my songs, hope you all like it (youtu.be)
submitted 3 years ago by [email protected] to c/[email protected]
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It's in the final of a national contest I entered too!!!

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[–] [email protected] 5 points 3 years ago (1 children)

Pretty nice beat, definitely has promise!

The rapping sounds too much like a white teenager trying a bit too hard to sound cool / gangsta rapper like, but maybe that is ironic? Anyways... don't take it personal if it isn't :)

[–] [email protected] 3 points 3 years ago

thanks! welp, that's probably due to me being a white teenager trying to sound cool XD. It's not intentional, but hopefully i can work on it a bit more

[–] [email protected] 3 points 3 years ago (1 children)

@amplifi Thanks for sharing! I like it.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 3 years ago

Thank you!

[–] [email protected] 3 points 3 years ago (1 children)

loved how the beat slightly alters throughout, the part between 1:15-1:45 is quite freakin cool

[–] [email protected] 2 points 3 years ago

Thanks! It sounded really stagnant otherwise, i really apppreciate that

[–] [email protected] 2 points 3 years ago (1 children)

good tunes. cheers mate, kudos.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 3 years ago

Thanks :D

[–] [email protected] 1 points 3 years ago* (last edited 3 years ago) (1 children)

I'm not exactly knowledgeable about rap music, but I enjoyed the song! The enunciation was good, the rhyme schemes varied, and a thematic through-line tied it all together! On another note, it's neat that you have a Gemini capsule!

[–] [email protected] 2 points 3 years ago

Thanks so much! I appreciate that so much!!!! i really need to post more on there :0