Be confident and Get to the point first, don't build up with a lot of talking, hook them first to catch their ears and spit it out.
Example:
"We can save time and reduce mistakes if we keep the papers together in a box so we can find them and check them"
Vs
"What I'm thinking is we get a box, it doesn't have to be a big box, any size really and what we can do is like, put the papers in it, and we can all put the papers in it and that way, if we need to when we want to find them, we can look through and check to make sure that it's there and everything is right, that way we won't have as many errors and we won't have customers yelling at us that we forgot things"
Unfortunately, people have short attention span, they are busy multi tasking and don't have time for a long story.
At least that seems to help me. Sometimes you have to be dramatic or funny too.
Also, some people are just jerks and don't have enough respect for others
What is wrong With him?