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[–] [email protected] 7 points 1 week ago (2 children)

It was so out-of-place, I didn't even notice it!

[–] [email protected] 5 points 1 week ago

Well obviously it should have been a semicolon separating clauses. It should read:

The older you get the more deeply [you get]; out of grocery stores, you care about the lay.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 week ago

i always read commas as pauses, and when they're at the end of a line they sound like breaths. it sounds so weird in my head.