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3. What happens in feedback or critique requests posts stays in these posts: Basically, if you encounter someone you gave feedback to on their work in their post, try not to quote and argue against them based on their concrete writing elsewhere in other discussions unless invited. (As an example, if they discuss why they generally enjoy outlining novels, don't quote their excerpts to them to try to prove why their outlining is bad for them as a singled out person.) This is so that people aren't afraid to post things for critique.

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5. Solarpunk rules still apply. The general rules of solarpunk of course still apply.

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Hail and well met, and also welcome; welcome to the 11th writing club update. Fun fact about the number 11: it's only the tenth positive palindromic number, and it will be 11 more months before we encounter our next one (22). Wow.

The weather here has been exceptionally rainy lately, and so perfect for weeding, editing, and savouring moments over hot cups of ginger tea.

I hope you are all safe and that your ginger and writing projects remain free of mold.

Speaking of writing, this is a post about writing. And these are our writers:

Brave scrivenauts, out on the shoals of imagination. Wading through the pools of doubt, and mucking about in the mud of enlightenment. Probably talking with the crabs or clams of metaphor or simile or something, too...

As always dear passerby you're welcome to join us for as long or short as you like -- simply share what you're working on and your goal for the next month, and I'll add you to our list of illustrious weirdos.

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[–] [email protected] 5 points 1 month ago (2 children)

So for the TTRPG campaign/manifesto on solarpunk in rural New England, I think we've been making good progress. We're officially in line edits now - we spent a couple weeks going through the sections and deciding on layout/organization changes, and now we're digging into the content. I'm still trying to make sure each section has a description the GM can read out if they're caught flatfooted, but we're also adding sections to make finding NPC motives and capabilities easier. I think the changes are a big improvement on making it easily usable for people who aren't me.

I'm especially pleased to have fit another regional issue/personal anxiety into a previously-underdeveloped section: the Hemlock Wooley Adelgid.

One of the groups the players can visit in the open world is a Rewilding Crew. Previously they were there to check up on plots of once-extremely-damaged land which had been restored decades before, and were mostly included so they could talk about destructive forestry practices, rewilding techniques like rough mounding, forest succession, etc, and to give the players a hand on researching potential dump sites. I gave them an additional job: re-establishing Eastern Hemlocks in their mid-suscession projects. This let me include some info on the modern-day threat of the Hemlock Woolly Adelgid, and some ways it could be neutralized or at least made less invasive in the future using IRL techniques (such as importing very specific predator beetles). Plus it was a chance to write some good news for one of my favorite trees. I really like finding opportunities to make the campaign a little more dense with relevant information, and making a somewhat bland section pull triple duty adressing multiple modern day environental issues happening in New England, that feels like an improvement.

My other writing-related project is more publishing related. A year or so ago I really got into bookbinding (by which I mean I learned one very basic technique for making decent hardcover and paperback books and used it again and again to make a bunch of books I'd only ever been able to get as PDFs into real physical books on my shelf). I love sharing anything that saves other people some work so I also shared all the print-ready interposed files and covers I prepared. I made several copies of the Fully Automated rulebook and provided the files for the book block and cover and the devs hosted them on their website AND SOMEONE CAME ALONG AND BOUND THEIR OWN COPY USING MY FILES! So cool. To this day the only way to get a physical copy of Fully Automated is to find an unguarded office printer and try some bookbinding (though we do plan to set up an at-cost print-on-demand book eventually).

Recently I was talking with a writer friend and one of our old topics of conversation came up - the gulf between indie music, especially punk and lo-fi and indie books. Indie music tends to be weird and different - proudly something a record label wouldn't release. It's it's own thing. But when you're self publishing a book there's a tremendous pressure to make it look like 'the real thing', to conceal that it wasn't printed by one of the big publishing houses. This goes on even as those companies cut costs, refuse to provide editors, use AI slop for covers, and generally screw their authors. We'd talked before about making indie books more like lo-fi music, but aside from sites like AO3, didn't have a good idea for that. But my experience with bookbinding and Fully Automated got me thinking about releasing more stuff that way - possibly even eventually building an entire archive of print-ready, interposed copyleft and public domain books and short stories and covers. I love the idea of sidestepping the publishers altogether and sending people the actual book itself, some assembly required, and spreading a wonderful skill set along the way. Bookbinding is fun and genuinely quite approachable even with extremely basic tools. Some classes and books make it sound a lot more difficult than it is, you can put a full paperback or hardcover together with stuff from your arts and crafts box and a couple tutorials off the Internet.

For the short term, I'm just helping writer friends interpose and bind stories they were already putting online for free, but I'd like to start something bigger eventually. There's a big bookbinding community out there but it seems kinda siloed - I think a place to share files and self publish without all the middlemen could be kinda neat.

In the meanwhile I'm happy to help anyone who wants to make a zine or bookbinder version of their stories.

[–] [email protected] 3 points 1 month ago (1 children)

Wow what an energizing report! It's nice to see so much action. I especially love all this bookbinding stuff, and sidestepping publishers but still making an actual book item (very appealing!). You got me thinking RE the gulf between indie music and indie books... it's a great point. I don't usually question the structure or presentation of a book, it's almost like "book" is a genre on its own--which of course, it is not.

I would love to hear more about that topic. I don't suppose you or your writer friend have written anything else on the topic?

Either way, great update. Always a joy to read what you've been up to. :)

PS. Today I learned about line editing, adelgids, and rough mounding!

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago

Thanks! I don't think we've written about it elsewhere but it's a favorite rant of mine so I'm happy to talk about the gulf between self publishing as it is and what I think it could be if folks saw it as its own proud thing rather than a shameful admittance you couldn't get a big company to buy your story. I'll think it over and write more in another comment!

As for the bookbinding process I genuinely recommend anyone try it - it's so much easier than you probably think! Plus of all the hobbies I've picked up over the years, it has one of the lowest costs of entry - the starter tools are extremely simple and can be bought at a lot of thrift stores.

If you want to read an amature account of the bookbinding process and the various resources I use, I've posted about my own bookbinding projects a few times over on our movim microblog:

https://movim.slrpnk.net/blog/jacobcoffinwrites%40slrpnk.net/bookbinding-the-fully-automated-rulebook-odTqQI

https://movim.slrpnk.net/blog/jacobcoffinwrites%40slrpnk.net/bookbinding-continued-trying-canvas-softcovers-dn0KBu

https://movim.slrpnk.net/blog/jacobcoffinwrites%40slrpnk.net/a-quick-paperback-bookbinding-project-qqhaeW

https://movim.slrpnk.net/blog/jacobcoffinwrites%40slrpnk.net/e0befe7b-8bb3-49d3-ae61-40926c330d2e

https://movim.slrpnk.net/blog/jacobcoffinwrites%40slrpnk.net/hardcover-bookbinding-and-laser-etching-the-bookcloth-UGHW2D

https://movim.slrpnk.net/blog/jacobcoffinwrites%40slrpnk.net/10th-bookbinding-project-the-space-between-dreams-ggveLY

https://movim.slrpnk.net/blog/jacobcoffinwrites%40slrpnk.net/redtail-s-dream-bootleg-hardcover-Oc3jRg

Fun fact! I actually learned about rough mounding here: https://slrpnk.net/post/2293073

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago* (last edited 1 month ago) (1 children)

Wow, bookbinding sounds like a cool skill!! Regarding TTRPGs I admire people as well who have the time and patience for them. I'm lucky enough when I can remember the rules of my own novels well enough, I doubt I would fare well in a more complicated gamified setting.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 1 month ago

I'm lucky Fully Automated's primary mechanic is both flexible and simple because I'm here to tell ya, I've played D&D and I don't think I could DM for that. Some folks are heavier on special game mechanics for each thing, and lots of rules, I treat my games more like collaborative storytelling with dice rolls just when the players want to do something cool or difficult. The big challenge for me is managing all the potential story paths on the fly and sort of adjusting what/when certain events outside the players' control should happen to manage the pace of the plot and keep things feeling cinematic. At this point I know my NPCs pretty well and can kinda ad lib reactions to the players just fine, so sessions where I'm just reacting to the players are kinda easy - but when they set big events in motion I need to quickly balance what happens and try to case out where those events end. Does this push the bad guy to try and confront them directly? Should one of their informants call in now with the information they asked them to find last session? Stuff like that where I know it'll adjust the course of their story. So I guess I'm mostly constrained by "what would happen" - what feels reasonable or believable for characters, some of whom the players don't even know about yet!

[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 month ago* (last edited 1 month ago) (2 children)

My dry spell is continuing quite fiercely, though if you count writing cover letters I have been writing up a storm! Haha. My daily microfiction practice is closer to weekly one now, but I'm not beating myself up over it. It'll come back to me, I just know it. I'm focusing on bedtime reading (60s social sci-fi) and jotting down any odd notion that pops into my head, for when I do start writing at length again.

EDIT Just in the interests of sharing, here's a little snippet of microfiction I worked on this month. I'm kind of unsure about all of it, but I like exploring the idea of ghostly consciousness, and ambiguous personhood. It's not especially "solarpunk" but there's something about it that I just can't turn away from.

[–] [email protected] 3 points 1 month ago

I love the idea of a cute folded mech that loves chili peppers!!

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago

Keep us posted if you find something cool among the 60s sofi! I'm very interested in discussing those ideas, but often the 70y old American English makes it harder for me to read smoothly. I tried reading A Canticle for Leibowitz this last month and despite the cool concept (that was what made me read it), I've been very unimpressed by the actual reading experience.

As for the block, I can 400% guarantee it will end as soon as your stressful patch ends, so best of luck for that!

[–] [email protected] 4 points 1 month ago (1 children)

I don’t have much to update on the writing front, I’ve been mostly busy with tech things. Some of that in preparation for perhaps making my own text font later for rendering books, so it’s kind of book related tech. I should be back to more writing next month, however. I’ll get back into some editing of my disabled mage series and should then eventually get around to continuing to draft the third and hopefully last book.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago

Perhaps it's a bit of a coping mechanism, but when I have an overarching goal I tend to label anything I do as "grist for the mill." Reading? That's research, definitely grist. Tech admin? Much grist -- books are technological artefacts. Socializing? That goes to lived experience -- very gristy. Relaxing? That's battery recharging, perhaps the gristiest thing of all!

Hope your month goes well whatever you do with it. :)

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago (1 children)

Tough month because I've been swamped with a number of things, but here's a bit of progress:

  • Took part in a Solarpunk Game Jam as a writer with an Indonesian team, for which I wrote ~25k words of dialogues on Inky. Eventually our devs didn't manage to make the game playable by the deadline, but it was a fun experience and I've learned how to do branched dialogues and storylines
  • Sketched a new setting, perhaps to be used in the future or lent to someone who needs it. It's a world with varying tides, so that "land" isn't defined and stable and maps can't be drawn.
  • Wrote a ~1k word short story on another author's setting

June is going to be a lot more free, so I'm going to try and tackle these things:

  • That one famous editing for the fantasy book I've postponed for the last... three monts 😵
  • Finish outlining the Kanteletar Library stories (five in total) and maybe write one of them
  • One more Meteorina? I have an idea about end-of-century Venice built on top of the current skyline, with bridges and catwalks on top of bridges, to deal with the risen sea levels... But I still need a plot so let's see!
[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago (1 children)

Your updates are always so inspiring! I can't imagine writing ~25 000 words of dialogue and just moving on because of factors outside of you control. 💀 But I admire your outlook--it's not a waste if you got something out of it, like experience with Inky. Btw have you ever used Twines? It's more appropriate for making standalone adventure games than dialogue trees, but I feel like every writer should spend at least an hour playing around with it, just to see what's possible using just their words.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago

Never heard of that, but I'll make sure to check it out! I liked this different approach to storytelling, and I'll definitely come back to it in the future... as soon as the frustration dies out! 😂